Rewrite p. 29 l. 5-28

Task: Rewrite p. 29 l.5-28 in another point of view. Use the third person narrator with an unlimited point of view.

[…] Miles was scared because he didn’t know what they are going to do with him. He thought they would beat the shit out of him so that Miles looked great for his first school day and while they carried him to the fake beach he felt the fight-or flight reflex swell up him but he knew that it will never work for him. By the time when Miles realised where they were going he knew what would happen and he calmed down because he could handle that.

When the four of them reached the beach Kevin and the two other guys mummified Miles and they didn’t thought that Miles could die in succession to this prank. They were only angry because he hung out with the Colonel and they hated the Colonel. They believe that he was the one who ratted out Marya and Paul and nobody should back a rat like the Colonel. Miles was very afraid and begged for his manumission but Kevin and the two others didn’t thought about let him go because they had an adrenalin kick while they picked him up and hurled him into the water.

By Steffi